Please tell me if this is good for a first??

[..Super Evan]

Feedback if you could, please

I just uploaded my first SONG song & I really need help on knowing if it's mixed properly
https://soundcloud.com/neffmoon/pure-shit Please check it out

Would anyone mind giving me feedback on the image of the song & if the flow's cool? This is my first official song so all I;m asking for is feedback on it. Thanks
https://soundcloud.com/neffmoon/pure-shit

This is the first song off my EP & yeah Please check it out.
https://soundcloud.com/neffmoon/pure-shit

ALL I CAN ASK FOR IS A CLICK TO A SHITTY ASS SONG. https://soundcloud.com/super_evan/pure-shit

STRICTLY looking for feedback. https://soundcloud.com/super_evan/pure-shit

I just made a beat & I feel like the drums are mixed bad. Any feedback? https://soundcloud.com/super_evan/sorry-frankie

THIS IS THE FIRST SONG I'VE TRIED TO MIX MYSELF ON & I REALLY JUST NEED SOME CRITICISM, ONLY GOOD AND HELPFUL PLEASE
https://soundcloud.com/super_evan/*******-quality

This is my first mixed song & I just need criticism, please and thank you
https://soundcloud.com/super_evan/*******-quality

I was really just trying to emulate Earl on Solace because I want to get more into lyricism, please give me your opinion, less negative comments though, thank you
https://soundcloud.com/super_evan/*******-quality

 

[DJ.Oblivion]

Cool vibes, just work on beat structure

 

[mollysoundzzz]

I like it!!!