Constructive feedback please?

[pinder325]

Hi,

I have just finished my first proper song. I am a newbie so don't expect too much, but some feedback would be great!
Thanks,

 

[EmmaG]

I really like it Keep it up

 

[makrsamples]

You've got some cool elements but overall it's a bit too busy. For each part of the track as yourself what the listener should focus on.

Also the Beat It sample is out of key from the rest of the track.

 

[SoundShock Audio]

Hey pinder. Good job on your first tracks! For popular entertainer, I would definitely make sure that all the elements are in one specific key as it feels a bit out of key. And for Horizon, I would add transition fx in there like white noise sweeps to glue the track together. For free sounds that would work well in your tracks you can check out our catalog of free downloads! SoundShock | Free loops and samples, Presets, Tutorials, & More