Overview|
@yoda, i agree with kalm kid that your snare is def a lil too loud. but i like your beat overall. i think the loop is perfect...dont need to see u do anything else to it...it fits the framework of a song fine. i wouldnt go chopping stuff up, just for the sake of chopping stuff to please the producers on here...cause in the end, u make the music u make in hopes that rappers and singers will want to get on that music...not producers... but thats just my 2 cents
mix|
in terms of your mix...its sounds like everything might be tracking a lil hot...so id turn stuff down, like everything...i'm surprised it wasnt clipping when u exported it. Id layer the kick too just to give a lil more knock too
Beat|
I'd swap out some of the drum sounds. they dont really fit all that well to me...but thats just my opinion take it how u want. It just sounds like u have this electronic 808-ish drums and this old soul beat and they not matching up to me...i'd layer the drums u have with some sampled drums from somewhere and see what that sounds like
hope all this helps