dropped first beattape, some of the samples:

Hi guys,

made a quick flip of that first fire sample :D let me know what you think!



 
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2. "Forever"- the bass is off key... but the chops are nice...

Pretty dope overall

4. "I Can't Take It"- That snare is too soft, needs a more natural not as much reverb on the snare, bring it more up front in the mix.

5. "Heaven..."- The bass gets off key, but it's a dope beat however the bassline being off key throws the overall joint off... nice chops

7. "I Could Be King..." This is dope... your best beat so far

Overall first listen to any of your joints, your chops are good but work on your bass lines a lil more because it's throwing me off... dope beat tape but the bass being off just kills it...
 
mr knitty, thanks for your honest critique man
i agree on almost everything you said, except the bassline on "heaven", cuz i used the bass sound from the sample. so if it's offkey to you, then the original composer failed it. lol
but thanks again. this motivates me to work harder!
much love!
 
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