Tech house track

[Edddy]

I tried to make a tech house track, tell me what you think, any ideas for improvement?

soundcloud.com/stedd/stedd-express-train

[Andreilg]

hey nice job, i think at 0:30 you shouldve added more variations in the stabs its too reptitive. I like the "climax" but i think it might need a little more, possibly variating the stabs there would give it that extra touch that i feel it needs, I like that it isn't overdoing it like a lot of other tracks though. gj

[CDLMonline]

I tried to make a tech house track, tell me what you think, any ideas for improvement?

soundcloud.com/stedd/stedd-express-train

hey thxxxxxx for offering it for free
I'll download it and use it in my DJ mixes )
I don't think that you need to change anything!!
veeeeeery good work...
keep doing what you're doing.

[acetheface954]

i don't sense anything wrong with it. if i played tech i'd spin this with no problem. well done.