I'm Back With A HOUSE BEAT!!!!!

**SouthRyda** · 06-07-2007

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=643453

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=643453

Lemme know what you think ya'll!!!!

**jerzboy** · 06-16-2007

I am not a expert of house music but I do listen to it and I dont know if this is good (well to me). not trying to be mean just trying to give my opinion. I am actually trying to learn how to make house tracks, and hey it's ur first time so your going to get better, keep practicing. To me this is the trance, electronica, house, bass stuff is the hardest genre to make, Well make good tracks with.

**twilax** · 07-01-2007

yo Ryda,

at some points the whole track sounds kinda disordered and it seems like you put in all elements you liked.

also i dont realy see an arrangement sheme (verse, refrain...)

percussion in the beginning is very good, would give it more regards during the whole track. bassline has potential but needs more bounce.
drums need more bounce too of course.

strings aint that bad, anyway i prefer real synthesized strings over samples.

dont like the sound you introduce at 0.30. it gets very annoying after a few bars and kills the atmosphere imo.

good attempt tough for your first house song

**sleazyeasy89** · 07-02-2007

Yeah, I think its really solid for a first attempt, but like twilax said, it sounds like you combined all the elements you liked. And I have to tell you man, especially when youre first starting, its really hard not to do that haha... when you're playing around with the all the pads and ****, you're just like damn, that sounds good... so does that... this is pretty tight...etc. You just gotta try to keep it as clean as possible and keep the listeners focus on certain things.

**999** · 07-14-2007

I kinda agree with the other guys, but for a first attempt, its good yo!

**AudiosEnvy** · 07-14-2007

Just a quick note. Been doing House for 10 years, live the NYC House scene. Alrighty.

Oh man, the beginning made this track sound so promising. The pad with the bongos into the kick, wonderful...... then that dreadful synth comes in... and never leaves. Re-dodo the track with the kick, bongos, pads and some change ups, a dark bass line, some variation, maybe a couple vocal samples and you'll be alright.