Housy track

[Onyxcloud]

ok so i'v been working on this track for awhile now.... and it sounds ok on my computer speakers and a "little sub" but when I go out to my car to actually test it on my 2 12"s when it hits the more bassey part of the song it doesn't sound as good.... or the bass is overwhelming the bass drum somehow.... and yeah so I'm kind of at a loss of what to do next to fix this problem.... some honest opinions would be cool.

I use FL studio 10

[DjLuzNegra]

Sweet track, i could understand where in the bass part it could overwhielm with bass.. Did you cut bass from the kick/Bass in the project mix? or try to Lower the bass in you're car

[Onyxcloud]

yeah, at first I noticed there was a bass boost on the kick, so I removed that. it sounds a little better, but the bass and the kick somehow clash alot when I'm using my car subs. theres nothing wrong with the bass in my car...other songs with alot of bass sound fine. the track sounds fine on the little sub I have with my computer speakers. idk what to do.

---------- Post added at 03:32 PM ---------- Previous post was at 02:05 PM ----------

So i think i may have fixed it.... I realized the soundgoodizer was too high, now I think the kick might have to change.

you can check it out on my sound cloud

www[dot]soundcloud[dot]com/onyxcloud

[UltraFused]

love the dirty section in the track bassline is mean!! you need to do something with that kick drum can hardly hear it

[Onyxcloud]

Thanks!! and yeah I noticed the bassdrum isn't at it's finest....

going to have to do something about that.

---------- Post added at 11:23 PM ---------- Previous post was at 10:35 PM ----------

ok so i turned up the kick drum now I think it should be ok....

soundcloud[dot]com/onyxcloud/onyx-1-30-free-download

[RakunaFields]

That's pretty good!

[trkkazulu]

I wouldn't mind having a look at the project. I could give you some really useful feedback.

[Rusak]

Love the dirty warping bass. Needs progressive hats and a cracking snare coming in. even a staggered or delayed vocal sample (1/8 or 1/4) over the top to drive it on. As others have said you need to fix your kick. limit then compress it, and your bass down.
Personally don't go for the light synths... but thats just taste. think they ruin the track.

[trkkazulu]

Your track sounds good. Thing is, the source of your problem is what you're mixing on. Your monitors are lying to you. Before you do anything, you should replace your monitors. Once you have a good set of reference monitors in place, then you can start making adjustments to your mix that will matter and translate to any other listening environment.

J. Wells
Check out my gig on Fiverr at: fiverr.com/trkkazulu/play-bass-on-your-track

[DMN86]

whats the track called?