First song (progressive house)

**Marceauxx** · 05-16-2012

soundcloud [dot] com /marcmaher/swell
give me some tips to get better please >.>

**taygo0o** · 05-16-2012

I'm still new myself, but that's a nice melody you have. I'm guessing you should probably use more backround sounds that give the song more flavor? Like some random sounds and switch up the melody instead of one melody for the whole song

**alltrue** · 05-16-2012

Wow! Beautiful progressive pluck synth! Great design. The part at 2:44 sounds like it would be very good except the synth is offbeat a bit and it distracts from the overall sound. Try adding alot of detail, detailed fills, cuts etc. Keep up the work your on music!

**TheAstrolabe** · 05-17-2012

not my style of music, but it is well produced for that Deadmou5-like style. Like others have echoed, I would work on variation..whether it be in percussion, breakdowns, or even taking your melody up a few semitones. Some nice lush pads for harmony and counter melody would be great. You can play with the filter frequency and resonance on your main synth

I think percussion needs the biggest boost, its very machine-mechanical now with everything square on the beat.

Great start!