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looking back at my life through them cold days and dark nights,
the only way i knew was wrong to make things right,
in the dark trying to make things bright,
forgive me lord but can you show me the light,
still in the struggle the streets stay holding me tight,
on the grind because the one chance wont come twice,
we in the fast lane living for today and if tomorro we bleed
choose your own path dont follow my lead our father have mercy on me i witnessed things that you dont want to see been through places you dont want to be
the paranoyer got me walking with my hands on the heat theres no turning back the games got me in to deep mentally in stressed phsicly im weak ..

what do you think? im 15 been writing since i was a lil boy lol but stopped for a year im just thinking are my words good enuff to start up again or should i just forgt about it?
 
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