Feedback or opinions for that Progressiv House/ Trance Track

[DayJump]

Hey,

iam a 16-year-old producer of EDM. Please tell me what do you think about my single "The Reason of Me" https://open.spotify.com/track/3zpaW7ybEH0HNv03jbgKUl

if you haven't Spotify, here is an other link: https://soundcloud.com/smilecreationsmusiclabel/bp2016ade002-ben-powers-the

Thanks for your help!!

 

[⚚ kormins ±]

Who gives a fuck how old you are.

The intro is a bit lingering, would be cooler if it calmed a down and subsided a bit longer before the drop.


The drop is quite epic.

I'd turn the riff instrument down a bit in the 5-8khz area.

28k listens and 6 likes? Stinks.