CAn someone help me with my progressive house track?

  1. Auron Silverburgh
    Auron Silverburgh
    Hi everyone. Im new here on the forum and i hope that ive postet this on the right place.

    I am a hobby producer and i try to make all sorts of music. my newest attempt is a progressive house track like shingo nakamura, mango or mossy.
    the track is not finished yet. i like to know what i can/need to change to make it more lovely and that i can use your feedback in the track. its really simple built. afterwards it needs an proffessional mix and mastering.

    heres the track and thank you.

    Auron

    https://soundcloud.com/auron-silverb...ive-house-test
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